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AQA GCSE English Language
Paper 2, Question 5
“Reality TV is killing creativity. There’s no artistic merit in talent shows, fly-on-the-wall documentaries
and scripted reality soaps. We need to start nurturing real talent.”
Write an opinion column for your school newspaper, explaining your views on reality TV.
(24 marks for content and organisation 16 marks for accuracy)
[40 marks]
I think that reality TV shows are rubbish. Their stupid, silly and
simple. they should be banned and we should get some proper
shows made that people actually want to watch. Do you think
there boring?
I know loads of people in this school like watching shows like
towie or the x factor. They talk about them all the time like their
really brilliant to watch but actually thier just a waste of time. Do
they like being bored? The actors in them are really useless and
only do it to be famous they are not even doing it because they
are any good at acting and the storylines are rubbish because they
all end up going out with each other and talking about each other
and they never do anything else. dont they no they are just boring?
And in x factor they never have any good acts or bands because
all the singers on it just cover pop songs and cant even rite their
own material so they are not proper musicians. If you look at the
downloads the songs get wen they win they dont even sell very
many because people don’t actually like the music that much. Do
you like this boring music? Reality tv are like junk food.
One of the things you could have if you got rid of reality TV is more
detective shows like CSI because they are really popular and there
are always new ones being made which are even better because
they keep finding new teckneeks to solve crimes in real life. Do you
like being bored? If so just keep watching reality tv.
Sample Answer
Marking Comments
AO5:
Simple vocabulary.
AQA GCSE English Language
Paper 2, Question 5
Some simple linguistic devices (rule of three, simile), although rhetorical questions are repetitive.
Some sense of audience (reference to fellow students).
Awareness of the purpose of the task, including alternative to reality TV given.
Two arguments given and linked.
Paragraph breaking quite erratic.
Simple introduction.
Marks awarded: 5 marks - level one
AO6:
Clear sentence demarcation and punctuation mostly controlled.
Subject-verb agreement mostly controlled.
Spelling of simple words is accurate.
Lack of variety in sentence structures.
Some varied vocabulary, but spelling of these words is inaccurate.
Marks awarded: 7 marks - level two
Total marks awarded: 12 out of 40

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